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wolf_guy
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Unread post Mon Sep 11, 2017 4:31 pm

Simply put, just two poems I wrote while in the train.

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Tell me what you think.

blackswan237
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Unread post Mon Sep 11, 2017 4:35 pm

That's deep. I loved your poems hun. I loved the way you've worded them.. so true!

Samanthaj
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Unread post Tue Sep 12, 2017 3:28 pm

Perfect Wolfguy.. Thanks for sharing with us and please keep them coming :clapp: :clapp:
Writing is a good outlet. I love how you added the pictures.. creative. I like them.

Sam j
"Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think." - A. A. Milne

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Kohl85
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Unread post Wed Sep 13, 2017 1:18 pm

Both are fantastic, and beautifully written. I can definitely relate. I always admire someone who can put what some of us have felt into words so perfectly. Thanks for sharing your talent. :hugs:

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Ravensfox
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Unread post Mon Dec 11, 2017 10:51 pm

You remind me alot about myself with how deep poetry goes on an emotional level. They are really good Don't ever put yourself down:)
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Unread post Mon Dec 11, 2017 10:59 pm

loved em keep writing you express so well

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CelticRose
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Unread post Sun Aug 12, 2018 12:18 pm

Beautifully written! Thanks for the sharing!
Don't lose sight of your path.

RoguePhantom
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Unread post Sun Aug 26, 2018 2:52 am

Well in style and wording, both deep and clearly expressed!

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