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Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated

Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2017 4:31 pm
by wolf_guy
Simply put, just two poems I wrote while in the train.

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Tell me what you think.

Re: Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated

Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2017 4:35 pm
by blackswan237
That's deep. I loved your poems hun. I loved the way you've worded them.. so true!

Re: Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated

Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 3:28 pm
by Samanthaj
Perfect Wolfguy.. Thanks for sharing with us and please keep them coming :clapp: :clapp:
Writing is a good outlet. I love how you added the pictures.. creative. I like them.

Sam j

Re: Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated

Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2017 1:18 pm
by Kohl85
Both are fantastic, and beautifully written. I can definitely relate. I always admire someone who can put what some of us have felt into words so perfectly. Thanks for sharing your talent. :hugs:

Re: Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated

Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2017 10:51 pm
by Crimson Fox
You remind me alot about myself with how deep poetry goes on an emotional level. They are really good Don't ever put yourself down:)

Re: Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated

Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2017 10:59 pm
by new
loved em keep writing you express so well

Re: Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated

Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2018 12:18 pm
by CelticRose
Beautifully written! Thanks for the sharing!

Re: Two poems I wrote, feedback appreciated

Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2018 2:52 am
by RoguePhantom
Well in style and wording, both deep and clearly expressed!