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Destiny Be Mine

Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 8:12 am
by D3F3ND3R
Glistening gaze unveil my soul

Flow through me as a subtle breeze through an open door to a blissful horizon

Golden strands to stroke flawless beauty, a gentle touch to perfect life's meaning

Pulse resonate unto another

Subtle beats to soothe, wisp away to reveal unhealed seams

Bring together a broken will

Loving hand lead me upon embrace, lay me upon a silver dream

Fade away and bring acceptance I pray

As passion to warm a weary shell, breathe meaning into me as to stoke my flame

Rise with me as day to new beginnings, forever more be my guiding light

Re: Destiny Be Mine

Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 8:20 am
by BonnieJayde
That's beautiful defender, love it!

Re: Destiny Be Mine

Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 10:40 am
by Owlscrying
Impressiive Thomas.

Wonderfully flowing, speaking to the soul's heart.


 

Re: Destiny Be Mine

Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2018 2:59 am
by RoguePhantom
Very impressive, with a clear plot and evolved wording; truly beautiful!

Re: Destiny Be Mine

Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2018 2:33 am
by DukeLordDuke
heh good poem

Re: Destiny Be Mine

Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2018 2:34 am
by DukeLordDuke
I LIKE I need to make at least 10 characters apparently so a.sdkfjasdlkfjasdlfkjasdflasjdflkajsdf