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Poetry by ComatosePhoenix

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comatosephoenix
Posts: 14
Joined: Fri Jun 09, 2017 11:16 pm

Unread post Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:26 am

Vectors at Midnight (Acrostic + Cinquain Swirl)

Veiled life
Enchantress - she
Chains me by sacred root
Threading needle - sanctuary
Octaves
Rise above the
Satellites, scattering

Across the frost covered twilight
Timeless

Mountains shadow
Iridescent futures
Defending powers of the moon
Nature
Incites the call
Giving unto cycles
Heavens exploding in all their
Treasures.

comatosephoenix
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Unread post Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:43 am

And I (Cinquain Swirl)

and I
crashed into the
deep blue sea with you
twirling here, under oceans deep
you are
all that I need
when I safeguard my heart
you break through the dark current's roar
and I
crash upon shores
sparkling brightly with a
new sense of peace, I belong where
you are

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Owlscrying
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Unread post Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:45 am

Image ComatosePhoenix.

Love the Cinquain parallel to Haikus, in exacting many emotions, in 5 lines.

Just beautiful, love your style.


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comatosephoenix
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Unread post Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:49 am

Owl (Acrostic + Haiku)

Octaves resonates
Warrior bloodlines within
Luminous heartbeats

comatosephoenix
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Unread post Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:51 am

Thanks Owl! Read the above poem! ;)
Owlscrying wrote:
Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:45 am
Image ComatosePhoenix.

Love the Cinquain parallel to Haikus, in exacting many emotions, in 5 lines.

Just beautiful, love your style.


Image

 

comatosephoenix
Posts: 14
Joined: Fri Jun 09, 2017 11:16 pm

Unread post Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:52 am

Prisms (Acrostic + Rime Couee)

Prisms heave upon broken shores
Ready to break open the doors
Inciting the siren
Shattering earthquakes with my roar
Making what is mine, also yours
Surviving - sovereign

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Rime Couee
Syllable ct: 8/8/6/8/8/6
Rhyme Scheme: aabaab

comatosephoenix
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Unread post Sat Jun 10, 2017 1:59 am

The End (Acrostic + Haiku)

Tracing stars above
Heaven's undercurrents sweep
Erupting the sky
Erupting their lies
Native scenes born again by
Dark supernovas

comatosephoenix
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Unread post Wed Jul 12, 2017 1:12 am

Dandelion Seedlings (Acrostic + Balassi Stanza)

Draw your bow and arrow
As the way is narrow
Now I beg thee awaken
Don't leave us alone
Endless crimes to atone
Let us not be mistaken
In the new days of hope
Over slippery slope
Not to leave us forsaken

Sunrise a breath away
Enough, is it to say?
Endless nights, yet you abide
Dreary eons, you stand
Lightning at your command
Ignite the fire inside
Notch arrows in your bow
Gracing the sky, aglow
Starry home above, our guide

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The brave and mighty Sagittarius constellation. Both dandelions and the Sagittarius sign are symbols of hope.
Balassi Stanza
Syllable: 6/6/7/6/6/7/6/6/7
Rhyme scheme: aadbbdccd

comatosephoenix
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Unread post Thu Oct 26, 2017 12:13 am

Winter (Acrostic)

Weathered and bitter
Incapable of feeling
Narcissistic to the bone
Trying to devour
Everything I made my home
Revealing we're all alone

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